I have ended up where I was probably heading all along, the geek’s delight and the nerd’s best friend. I decided to use the spreadsheet in Google Docs.
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I have ended up where I was probably heading all along, the geek’s delight and the nerd’s best friend. I decided to use the spreadsheet in Google Docs. So, I turned to the corkboard interface that Scrivener offers. I know that some writers adore this feature of Scrivener, especially when it comes to plotting and revision. This is what my effort looked like. I found that after so many words and so much text, that I wanted something visual in terms of beginning this revision. Although I’m as digital as they get, I investigated all manner of visual revision techniques. I was looking for something that could show me the structure and pace of the novel, virtually at a glance. Well, I have to confess that I didn’t think it was possible to write an 85,000 word first draft in eight weeks, including one week of plotting. I mostly have NaNoWriMo to thank for it plus a bunch of books about writing, a truckload of great novels I’ve read, a writing course or two, and many hours at the keyboard. Nevertheless, I’m surprised. In Part 3, by the end of Act 2, the defense is well along in making its case in court and yet their most important witness has killed himself and one of their defendants has admitted lying on the witness stand. At this point, Danny does the only thing he can to salvage the situation: call Col. Jessup to the stand and try to get him to admit ordering the Code Red. In the scenes below, the second half of Act 2 builds toward the final confrontation of the movie and moves our hero, Danny (played by Tom Cruise), into the courtroom to embrace the destiny that he has been denying. Here in the first part of the second act, we see Danny begin to move away from the premise that has sustained his character in the first act–to arrange a plea bargain for his clients, two Marines accused in the death of another, all of them under the command of Col. Nathan Jessup, the antagonist (played by Jack Nicholson). Below, we begin the second act with their first meeting. What the title really ought to say is “A Few Good Men and One Great Writer.” Per recommendations from writing coaches (and writers) such as Larry Brooks and Alexandra Sokoloff (please see their fantastic blogs for veritable treasure chests of writing information), I’ve decided to deconstruct the plot of a movie instead of a book this time around. It had been years since I’d seen A Few Good Men but I had the vaguest of memories regarding its plot and what I thought were the major plot points. Although I didn’t realize it at the time, A Few Good Men was originally a stage play, which I think may have something to do with it sticking in my mind as an example of a particularly strong three act structure. In the final installment of my plot analysis of Dracula, by Bram Stoker, we follow our heroes from the end of Act 2 to the exciting climax of this classic Gothic, horror, thriller. |
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